OMG OMG OMG. My excitement began immediately, at the title.
"Yusuf glances over, his dark eyes a deeper shade, like when the inception was through. Filled with guilt, just like his voice that tells him, 'Zombies.'"
When I read this, I was all like FUCK YES ZOMBIES and I loved that it was all Yusuf's fault. Yusuf, you irresponsible man, causing the zombie apocalypse... *shakes a finger at him* Yusuf isn't even that ashamed, haha. It's just like, well, there are zombies, so grab a weapon and bash in some brains. Yusuf is too awesome.
"'Don't tell me that I have to tell Fischer that Arthur might be eating his dinner while asleep now,' or trying to fuck his brains out, he thought." MEET A GIANT FISH, FUCK HIS BRAINS OUT. Line from The Lonely Island's "Like a Boss" and I could not help connecting the two. XD God, this is so funny! I like that you keep mentioning that condition where people eat in their sleep, but this time it's eating PEOPLE in their sleep. The best!
At the start of the story, I was really worried about Yusuf's cat because you specifically mentioned her not being there. D: And then how did she appear? Eames had a sexy thought and she ROLLED OUT OF HIS PANTS. And I loved that you named her Radha, too, which I subsequently stole from kirstenlouise. The cat-falling-out-of-pants-during-sexy-thought-time was in great taste here. I loved that you used my idea for that here, it was AWESOME.
The mentions of Eames/Fischer had me laughing (especially with the cat in the pants), like when Jim gets blood on him: "Eames felt his stomach clench at the sight, although he was slightly aroused by the flecks of red splashed all over Jim's face. It was sad just how much he was turned on by that, the memory of Fischer's broken li..." When it's Jim, violence is ALWAYS exciting. ALWAYS.
Also, I loved that Jim was in this story OMG. JIIIIIM, I LOVE YOU. And I immediately recognized that Batman reference, and I loved that Jim recognized it, too. Cillian Murphy as Jim, who is in Batman, and - AH, PARADOX. Love it. I also liked how Eames tried insisting that Jim was Fischer. :3
Thank you for this so much! It definitely made me laugh, and everything with Jim made me so so happy. Also, this line: "'The men, they were surrounding her, chewing on her flesh, tearing it right off like animals.'" AWESOME YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE VIOLENCE (or do you? Either way, I LOVE IT). ♥
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Date: 2011-01-05 05:26 am (UTC)"Yusuf glances over, his dark eyes a deeper shade, like when the inception was through. Filled with guilt, just like his voice that tells him, 'Zombies.'"
When I read this, I was all like FUCK YES ZOMBIES and I loved that it was all Yusuf's fault. Yusuf, you irresponsible man, causing the zombie apocalypse... *shakes a finger at him* Yusuf isn't even that ashamed, haha. It's just like, well, there are zombies, so grab a weapon and bash in some brains. Yusuf is too awesome.
"'Don't tell me that I have to tell Fischer that Arthur might be eating his dinner while asleep now,' or trying to fuck his brains out, he thought." MEET A GIANT FISH, FUCK HIS BRAINS OUT. Line from The Lonely Island's "Like a Boss" and I could not help connecting the two. XD God, this is so funny! I like that you keep mentioning that condition where people eat in their sleep, but this time it's eating PEOPLE in their sleep. The best!
At the start of the story, I was really worried about Yusuf's cat because you specifically mentioned her not being there. D: And then how did she appear? Eames had a sexy thought and she ROLLED OUT OF HIS PANTS. And I loved that you named her Radha, too, which I subsequently stole from
The mentions of Eames/Fischer had me laughing (especially with the cat in the pants), like when Jim gets blood on him: "Eames felt his stomach clench at the sight, although he was slightly aroused by the flecks of red splashed all over Jim's face. It was sad just how much he was turned on by that, the memory of Fischer's broken li..." When it's Jim, violence is ALWAYS exciting. ALWAYS.
Also, I loved that Jim was in this story OMG. JIIIIIM, I LOVE YOU. And I immediately recognized that Batman reference, and I loved that Jim recognized it, too. Cillian Murphy as Jim, who is in Batman, and - AH, PARADOX. Love it. I also liked how Eames tried insisting that Jim was Fischer. :3
Thank you for this so much! It definitely made me laugh, and everything with Jim made me so so happy. Also, this line: "'The men, they were surrounding her, chewing on her flesh, tearing it right off like animals.'" AWESOME YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE VIOLENCE (or do you? Either way, I LOVE IT). ♥